All Comments on 'Diana's New Reality Pt. 01'

by Nichy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I liked your story...

...and I hope it continues soon.

I also have a few small grammar corrections to offer, but I'm due elsewhere right now, so I'll return soon to make those suggestions, probably via feedback sent directly to you.

Thank you again for sharing your arousing story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
RUDE WORDSMITH critic

Very good!!!!

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