by LadyDaisy
This story was a little too short; maybe take some time to flesh it out a little, add some details. I only gave this two stars this time, but if you take similar plots and give them more detail I'm sure your next story will be getting a lot more.
Oh, and please ignore Anonymous. I think this guy is the same guy who is commenting on all of the new piss stories and insulting them. He needs to be blocked.
...but, yes, a bit too short also. I didn't quite get the connection between the urinary condition caused by the car accident. And I thought they came on to each other a bit too strong. But, I love diaper play stories and public pissing, etc.
Keep going. Keep writing.
Hallo LadyDaisy!
Short but kinky and I loved it,,, I hope you have more stories like this, hot and sexy,,, yes!
Thank-you for sharing.
Gay Kat.
YEA the accident sucked in a few ways but in the end two pretty ladies became 2 happy BABIES.
Not good. There is practically no realism to the story and hardly any story as there is.