All Comments on 'Diary of a Cock Sucker Ch. 14'

by Bicyclist

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m4mrdogm4mrdogover 10 years ago
Story line

NO offense ment, just my personal thoughts. I love the title but you have strayed away from it. I like cock sucking and cum eating and swallowing but NOT a fan of ass fucking but I am sure others have a completly diff opinon. Still a great story and I tend to skip over what I do not care for.

Thanks for writing it.

jim :o

William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
Great pornographic fiction.....but

Aren't we tending to get away from the original concept?

I still give it a 5 for excellent writing but I'd like to see more cum eating cock sucking and less butt fucking as was the case in the first dozen of so episodes. The book store encouonters were especially well conceived and described.

Perhaps 75 percent fellatio and the balance other forms of man to man diversion would be a good mix.

But above all don't let me discourage you from continuing the series. It's one of the better ones.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Ridiculous, absurd, filthy.....and wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
eat my cum

I am a married man who loves finding the occasional cock sucker. I have jerked off to every story i have read so far. I love the detail you put in to them. I would love someone who worships a cock like you do. Also since reading your storys i have started to crave cum i want it. I havent acted on this craving yet im letting it build. I have suck afew cocks at a video store but that was mostly to get my cock sucked. If anyone who reads this wants to have some fun in new jersey my email is cok4u2suk@yahoo.com.

ptscuriousptscuriousabout 2 years ago

As some others have commented, you appear to be drifting from the title of your story, you are starting to feature more physical intimacy and Fucking, your writing is of such a high standard that this is still enjoyable to read, however I personally hope that the 'Cock Sucking' of the story title remains the main focus of future chapters, all of which I very much look forward to reading.

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