by R_U_Romantic
The sexual acts are well written, but a bit more research would help make the whole thing more coherent. Englishmen like this would not have attended "high school" - they would probably have attended "public school", meaning a private school. And red Bordeaux is never chilled - best serving temperature is 63 or 64F.
Holy f***ing cow that was hot! I'm as hard as I've ever been right now.
Wonderfully explicit and descriptive chapter , but how could they serve a Bordeaux on ice , no wine steward would do this, in fact I would refuse such a thing if it was ever served to me , and you never fill a wine glass more than a third full with red wine it's a sin
Well written, carefully conceived, with strong characters and excellent build-up, this chapter is a superior reading experience in every way. The pacing is never hurried, yet never drags. The love scene, while a bit short, is brilliantly written, with a romantic atmosphere that pervades the entire chapter. Five stars