All Comments on 'Diary of a Pain Slut Week 05'

So much, from start to finish you have kept me intrigued and wanting more.

Please please please continue the story of Maddi and Shirley, i beg you.

5 shiny gold stars to complete the set.

As a fan of campy movies and stories, I must say you've done a marvelous job of erotically and yet quirkily describing intense S/M. Loved it.

As usual! Seriously: if you do not make a living writing, there is something screwed up in the world.

John

I have nailed my colours to the mast previously.

You write some pretty damn good stories.

This is no exception

Thank you for taking the time to write those lovely tale.

Loved the whole series, particularly how all of the characters came through as real people. You can see why Maddi was able to find her way to happiness because of the love and support of both her Dad and Mom, each in his or her own way.

I would love to read more about how Maddi and Shirley's relationship develops, and whether Vicki ever finds someone. Will Brad reappear? But even if it never happens, thanks for the ride!

voted 5 stars to all the chapters , loved the story.

undoubtedly one of my favs.

clearly one of your best.

wish more people could write about this genre in a similar fashion.

sprinkle a little fun & laughter

in amongst the dark & light.

a great read , kept me captivated throughout.

i hope the Diary can continue ,

wonderful protagonists you have created, deserve more attention.

by the end of chapter/week 5 ,

it's become one of those series

the reader just does not want to end.

if its not already in the pipe .

maybe it's something to return to

after the story has had a little corner time.

delightful bowl of porridge ,

not to thick or too runny, not to hot or too cold ,

not to sweet or too bland.

mmmmm yummm perfect .

please can we have some more

TwistedOliver

xxxhugsxxx

I'm not the same opinion than the previous, annonymous poster, maybe he/she is just a troll, or whatever someone like that is called.

I think you have written wonderfully about Maddie's tour to become the slave of one of her best friends and finds happiness and her cravings fulfilled.

As nearly all is said in the previous comments, I think I can make the rest somewhat short... ;-D I have to agree it would be great to see what the three of them are going to do next and how they will move on from here. Perhaps you can let this story sit here for a while and then maybe write a follow up. Perhaps as a diary of their pre-collaring counseling.

Well dear Technician, what do you think? ;-)

I meant the first anonymous comment obviously...

The overall story was very good. Well written with a good edit, very tight and clean writing. The story showed the characters grow throughout and ended nicely. Well worth the time to read.

Very enjoyable story. Thank you for writing it.

Great story. If you continue please include both mothers.