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All Comments on 'Diary of a Weak Man Ch. 01'

by writemarksmith

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ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosabout 8 years ago
"Diary of a doormat" is more like it.

... and yes, pick a name for a character and then stick with it. You might consider writing likeable characters, rather than these two thoroughly-unpleasant losers. I was barely able to finish the one page, it was so unpleasant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Five stars!

Another chapter please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

This was a great read, love the teasing. More please!

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