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Love the concept. I think you could have made more reference to your surroundings and not had it as the recitation of a list. The list is wonderful but some how it seemed a little repetitive. I had the thought no one would recite a list like that. They would take their time and in some way bounce off their surroundings. I felt too that there should be examples of what she means- like "Last Tuesday, remember....". Hope this helps.

O....M....G.....I am so fuckin hard...