All Comments on 'Dicks in the Dormitory'

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sexyjcanplaysexyjcanplayabout 12 years ago

NICE! Maybe a part 2.

klippertklippertabout 12 years ago
lets talk sex

That was a hot story. we didn't have skip though all the bibble babble. Great anticipation, before the blow job.

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggabout 12 years ago
You're breaking the rules of Writing 101

In particular, pick a tense (preferably the past rather than the present) and stick with it. The story was OK but the technical weaknesses made it much less enjoyable to read.

hungbottomhungbottomabout 6 years ago
Hot...

Did you get to become the dorm slut? Sounds to me like a great way to go to college, all of that hard young cock and cum for your enjoyment.

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