All Comments on 'Did the Moon Smile?'

not a quick wank story... but made me feel almost as good

Very likable characters, well except for two, that made this story come alive. I was hoping for the ending to be as it turned out, and I enjoyed the story.

You certainly captured the emotions of betrayal, grief and the demise of one who has suddenly been thrust into the situation of being left by the love of your life. Congratulations on a very well constructed,well expressed story that also had very believable charactors.

Please continue to write along this vein, with drawn out characters, interesting plot and imaginative dialogue, both inner and between the characters. Sensuous without being crass. One of your better pieces.

really enjoyed this story...only thing is they should have charged that bastard with rape....and as for her so called friend...well she wants kicking in to touch.......only thing I find irritating is the phrase you use about a women when in the throes of passion say...no...don't make me....stop....utter bull shit...every women I have known says yes...yes....yes...fuck me...fuck me...otherwise a damn good read....