All Comments on 'Different Perspectives Ch. 01'

by Catmoore

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice tease

It's fun to hear what both of them were thinking of each other. I have had some of those awkward moments with my own son so it's was exciting to hear both sides of their thoughts. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good story telling

Hi Cat,

I voted 100%, you tell a great story. I found it hard to follow at first but, the more I read the more I enjoyed.

Sincerely,

Richard

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
I'm glad this will be a series

Thank You

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 14 years ago
Super great story!

This is a wonderfully well written, very stimulating story! I can't wait for more! I'm really enjoying your style of writing!

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great First Story

Well written from both perspectives. Plenty of emotional charge. As we say in Maine...keep it up Cat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Thank you my lady

Thank you my Lady for bringing a edge,oomph and class to erotic writing. Panting for more - Anon

jim2268jim2268over 14 years ago
getting turn on by his aunt

a brilliant start to this some what very erotic story. can't wait to read more of this fascinating story.love the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
This piece transcends the genre

Cat this is a beautiful series and flows quite naturally. Each character comes across as genuine and their affair seems so credible. Thanks for sharing this!

Sassy SusanSassy Susanover 14 years ago
Excellent start, Cat

As I said in my private comment, Cat, I really like how you did this. You got me aroused and damp. I am sure if you keep this up you will have me wet and panting. And I like wet and panting. Keep going, girl. Make me cum.

Susan

JustDick2UJustDick2Uabout 14 years ago
Mmmm super tension

A great start to a series, you have really whetted the appetite - looking forward to the reading the cumin' chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
FIZZLE

A great big buildup that goes nowhere-----------

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hmmmmmmmmmm

Instead of writing how about knitting? Your about that age where you should be making your grandchildren sweaters anyways right.

Anonymous
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