by karaline
K.. This story really is one very good story. Sad that two so called adults are afraid to say what is on thier minds for fear of rejection. If I had been Richard I know I would have carried Ivy over my shoulder and let her know how I felt, then I am not him. The way you have ploted their way in life would make it sad if they dont end up together. I await each post with baited breath, not my usual self, knowing the area you write about as well as the gardening aspect shows you have either a great knowlege of hoticulture/garden design/Midlands area of UK or you have done deep research, either way you have and still are writing a very interesting story. Thank you seems to little to express how I feel, but that is all I can say.
A very nice story and it appears it is going to get even better as the walls and misconceptions come tumbling down.
The story is well-paced and we're getting to know the characters really well too! I agree that the details add a lot of realism.
It's been a good build up. I am looking forward to seeing him explain Sara. Well written. Please don't make us wait to long!!!!!
Hallo everyone, chapter 5 is pending and its a whopper, it might be up Sunday, more likely Monday though.
thanks again for all your comments, votes and fave, they make all the difference!
Karaline x
I find the relationship aspects for more interesting than explicit descriptions of the physical side of sex. In fact I normally skim over the parts that go into the physical aspects of sex!