by taurents
It was good in that I liked the story and the descriptions were good, but I felt there could have been more action at the end
Truely well written and with excellent character development. The twist at the end was a complete surprise too! Really good reading.
This story is well told. The plot developes quickly enough and includes a wonderful balance between romance and raw sex! The author obviously spends time thinking about his characters and their motivation. It's time to check out his other works and determine just how deep this well is.
I enjoyed the story and the way you moved it along, I felt a little rushed towards the end. I think you could have continued with this story without rushing the end.
The twist at the end took me by surprise. My only problem is
that he ended up cheating on his wife, or was he in an open
marraige? It is an interesting idea, old fantasied colliding with present realities.