All Comments on 'Dilemma'

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seafairer4usaseafairer4usaover 20 years ago
seafairer4usa

Fun story ,keep up the exclent writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Fair enough

It was good in that I liked the story and the descriptions were good, but I felt there could have been more action at the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
An unusual story, and an excellent one too

Truely well written and with excellent character development. The twist at the end was a complete surprise too! Really good reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Reality?

This story is well told. The plot developes quickly enough and includes a wonderful balance between romance and raw sex! The author obviously spends time thinking about his characters and their motivation. It's time to check out his other works and determine just how deep this well is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Longer

I enjoyed the story and the way you moved it along, I felt a little rushed towards the end. I think you could have continued with this story without rushing the end.

bruce22bruce22almost 16 years ago
Nicely done,

The twist at the end took me by surprise. My only problem is

that he ended up cheating on his wife, or was he in an open

marraige? It is an interesting idea, old fantasied colliding with present realities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice but wish it was even more romantic

I still loved it though!

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
Nope......

Couldn't get through half of a page. That bad......

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