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'Let's get it wet first, to help me get in.' He's pushing and rubbing his cock along my pussy with his hand, and I understand what he means, and help by moving my hips, and he takes my hand away, grips it strongly and doesn't let go, finds my other hand and takes hold of that, and holds me like that, hand in hand, while we find our rhythm. I don't want to wait much longer, so raise up a little, and pull one of my hands away from his. This time he doesn't stop me, but watches as I guide his cock into me. It's not as tight as the first time, but I still have to pause a couple of times before I can push myself all the way down, my breathing deepening as I feel myself stretch out to accommodate him. We sit still like that for a time.

'I think I'm getting used to you,' I finally say.

'I hope so,' he says, his voice low, and then he starts to push up into me, hands clamped on my hips to hold me tight onto him

'Mmm.' It's super sensitive down there, and I love his strength underneath me, inside me. I'm panting loudly. I think he is too. The headboard starts tapping against the wall, then banging against it as our pace increases. He's biting my nipples now, sucking and nibbling at them, and I'm taken over by the same unbearable release of heat as before, only this time I can feel how my muscles are contracting, squeezing on his cock. He gasps, pulls me down harder onto him, bucking his hips up against me, and I wonder if the headboard is damaging the wall. He twists my hair around his hand, yanks on it, making me cry out in surprise and pleasure. I brace myself with my arms outstretched, hands gripping the top of the bed board, and this helps me to meet his forceful thrusts with some strength of my own. He groans again, more loudly this time, still holding onto my hair, and I shift position, somehow making more room for him to go deeper into me. Then, we are both lost, together. His breathing is ragged, whistling almost.

Like a low howling? Yes, maybe.

'Dee Hernandez', he's whispering into my hair, my neck, gripping me around my waist. He drops his head onto my shoulder, and we both wait together for our heart rates to slow down, and our breathing to return to normal.

'I don't know your last name, Jim Green Eyes.'

'Begay,' he murmurs.

'Jim Begay,' I say, more to myself than to him.

He's looking at me now, head tipped back against the head board.

'If I can make you feel beautiful like this, maybe you'll be Dee Begay, one day.'

I smile, feeling like those green eyes are seeing more that just my face, my body. Maybe they can see my soul too. 'Maybe I will.' I kiss his face. 'One day.'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

very good!

51Woodie51Woodieabout 1 year ago

Hot, hot, hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I like your writing style

Languid, descriptive, sensual. You're among the best I've read on here! I look forward to reading through your whole list of stories.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionalmost 5 years ago
Lovely

A romance more than a coupling. Nice characters, too.

ROBERTODAVOROBERTODAVOabout 5 years ago
A beautiful story!

You show great depth of character and feeling in this quality story. It was wonderful to read.

robertodavo.

LargoKittLargoKittabout 5 years ago
Green eyes and undershorts

Beautifully written, Sara. I like the development of the beginning of the story. You've got the landscape right for an Ozzie. I wonder if I would dare write a story about an aboriginal couple. I also get curious about stories where a guy 'takes liberties' with a lady, especially in public. My understanding is that this is one of the hotter female fantasies, but I, for one would never grab for a nipple or pat an ass unless it was pretty clearly offered. Note for future 'yank' stories, ladies underwear are rarely called 'knickers', though I, and many women don't like 'panties' much. A Navajo guy with green eyes would be pretty striking. Fair dinkum tale.

steverob1054steverob1054over 5 years ago
Wonderful

Thank you Sara, that is such wonderful writing. You are an absolute gem !!

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 5 years ago
Devilboby says

Wish I had found you sooner your stories are beautiful,believable and oh so tender, as in the Neapolitan question just loving your style. No wham bam here.

AspernEsslingAspernEsslingabout 6 years ago
Excellent

Natural dialogue, as others have commented, that sounds just right. You also hint at greater depth in both of their lives, without going off on a tangent, or getting into a long-winded explanation. The slow build-up is best of all. Well done!

Sara2000ZSara2000Zover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you, thank you!

@ lonesometraveler and HeyFor4 - thank you for your feedback on my writing. I aim for as believable people and dialogue as possible, so I'm thrilled that you've picked that out as something you like in my stories.

@ FiveWolves - wow, what can I say, except a big thank you for your amazing compliments! Awesome to get something like that from a reader, thank you.

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