All Comments on 'Dinner'

Perfect length for a "public" type of story. Very well done. I'd kind of like to see you follow it up now with a separate piece on who these guys really are - a longer piece that actually gives character deets. We know what their fetish is, we know what turns them on, we know they need Magnums (nice detail, that, btw) but I'd kind of like to know what kind of families they grew up in, what kind of relationship they're looking for (and if it's even remotely similar, because I get the feeling that beyond the sex, they are not even close to being each other's type) and what they want out of life. Something real. But hey, for just being "Dinner" it was... delicious. Thanks.