All Comments on 'Dinner and a Show Pt. 02'

You have quite a talent for filling me with lust. Thank you for providing a moment of sexual rapture!

Bleah! Crap! 1st person minor - stupidest form of narrative. Couldn't get passed 3rd para, was getting sick. Popcorn wiped up with cunt slime? Tasting good? If you've ever really done that, you would know how untrue that is!

Stop writing. Get a job, flipping burgers; burn your hands so you can't hold a pencil or type any more.