All Comments on 'Dinner for Eight: First Course'

Andi Has Style, character, and Class. Just loved her first course. Can't wait to start the second course.

This series is totally enjoyable. Sex is fucking and sucking. Eroticism is anticipation and tension. It’s also context. The author works hard to provide detail about her characters and their surroundings so the reader can develop some empathy with them. This sets her writing apart from many others. The following graph is a fine example:

“By the time those days had passed, Mark had had his tuxedo cleaned, and Traci had chosen a pale pink evening outfit. Though it was cut modestly low across her shoulders, its lacy top clung to the curves of her breasts. The long skirt hugged the swells of her thighs. A slit from ankle to mid-thigh let the skirt flow freely around her trim legs. She wore a strand of pearls at her throat and her pearl drop earrings. She always wore her wedding ring.”

Everything before the last sentence pictures what she looks like. The last sentence tells me who she is. Wonderful! So, please keep it up and, as I read your work, so will I :)