by AndiAnders
I think yhat your dinner was excellent. And I'm sure that the food was good too.
T
A majority of stories in this web site are far too long. Most if not all need to be precis'ed down to ensure that they are short sharp and to the point.
A good story always has a beginning, a middle and end, and sometimes with a hook that leaves the reader wondering.
Most of the time, I feel like the authors are trying to keep the reader, reading on, but not aware many are falling asleep with the boredom, created.
Loved the erotic dinner party. Can't wait for another when the couples switch partners. One of the best group sex stories I have read.
Hugs,
Ray
One of the best meals I've had in a long time. Can I be on your next guest list?
8 Courses is not near enough to finish this Gorgeous mishmash of a story! 8 More Chapters ARE Needed and quickly - PLEASE!