All Comments on 'Dinner with Jay'

I loved the part when the two are in bed and vocalize their intention and needs to each other. That is hot in real and literary life. ;)

Great build up and yearning....wonderfully erotic and arousing!

To long a story

Another hot story...you are so good at writing erotic stories...Want to chat with you..I have gotten a message from you on Lit but I want to masturbate with you..

Luv it! Nothing better than a woman's description of what her orgasms are like! Nice sexual tension build. Best sex salways starts in the mind!