All Comments on 'Dip in the Lake'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hot story all young men should do hot old women like her.

I could just picture myself sucking her pussy been there done that great; story I want more and include mom. ten bears ,love the story line.

glass-salmonglass-salmonover 9 years ago
I certainly hope...

He fucks her in her tight, mature ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
old times

I was 23...she was forty something - best sex of my life - missed her when she moved away with her common-law.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Takes me back a bit.

Really well written with a sensible build up and scene setting. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MotherLESS women can't be MILFS

That and young hard teenage cocks usually cum too soon but quickly regain their hardness or never lose it at all.

SpreadHerCheeksAndFeast1SpreadHerCheeksAndFeast1over 9 years ago
Right on!

Awesome story. Brings back a lot of memories. I learned a lot back in the day from a few mature women. It's too bad she didn't teach him how to sniff, lick, suck and tongue fuck her tangy asshole until she came. That would have been an amazing experience for a young man gaining experience. Please add more to this story. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful

Great story, highly arousing - wish It had been me

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 9 years ago
LIKED IT

A fine example of telling the story mostly with dialog. We don't see that much on Literotica. It was so effective, I think I'll give it a try.

TomorrowTodayTomorrowTodayover 9 years ago
Brilliant

Can't wait for more. Cheers!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
I loved the interaction

and the word play that included a constant play on words

well done.

do we get to read about his next dip in the lake?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more

A Chapter 2 PLease!

geek_writergeek_writeralmost 7 years ago
Chapter 2 pls

Agreed, need Nother installment

chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
Wow Real Nice Read****

Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

HragsHragsover 4 years ago

I loved it. Great story !!!!

mrbobcmrbobcover 2 years ago

Wow!!! Just WoW!!! What a great adventure!!! Why didn't something like that happen to me when I got out of High School?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

well done very sexy, loving the older woman thing. I also think a chapter 2 would be great

oldtwitoldtwit9 months ago

Oh, I have read this before but had forgotten it, still think you got this nailed, short but so full of great descriptions, as a Brit it makes me laugh how I perceive you Americans if all the sex is written about on here, the parties have to be 18 or older, so the picture of an 18-year-old hiding a beer from his mum is just so funny, I know that it's probably only me.

Still great story.

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