All Comments on 'Dirty Business Pt. 01'

Why the need for a partner for two years, IF (a big if) their relationship was not very sexual nor even a loving one? Just because he is submissive male? maybe that's why he called her "my partner", not my love or my wife!!!! 1*

Give it up

I gotta say, what with all of the chastity and submission, fetish would have been a far better fit.

Oh ya, more more more please!

Great story, thanks.

so you thought "I'll dump it in loving wives. They'll read anything."

That was pretty awful. So much wrong with it that I can't be bothered explaining it to you. If you want to write SPH fiction then read from some of the best and learn how to do it properly. Authors like Horrorotica, Runtz, Timmywells - are masters of this genre of fetish fiction. You, on the other hand, have a long way to go.

I have 3 stars for a tough to follow read. Maybe get an editor? Good story line, who cares about the category. I find chastity, cuckold and sph stories hot! Keep trying and thanks for sharing. I'd love to see what happens when she gets back. And I hope after 14 weeks he at least got to cum!

god he is one dumb fuck kick the whore out

So bad that I can only feel sorry for such an inept author.