All Comments on 'Dirty Circumstances Ch. 02'

Immature, childish in the extreme.

Both of them need to grow up. I can understand Leona acting immature because of her age. She is the Chief's daughter so she probably stood a chance at getting out of that ticket if she would've had him look up her info. The time she voluntered to give him a blowjob could've been used to look her up. The cop knew better, she could've been some underaged girl.

Now there will be a love/hate relationship where they fight like cats and dogs and be jealous when they see the other with someone else. Another give away is their strange behaviour.

I love drama, just boring without it and I like that the storyline is different. The writing caught my interest instantly and I can't wait for the next update!!!

This is the start of tumultuous relationship. I can't wait to see where it leads!! Keep up the good work!

Thank you so far to those of you who commented on Chapter 1 & Chapter 2! I enjoyed reading most of your inputs and look forward to more in the future! For anonymous thanks for your opinion but without telling me why you see the story as a "bedtime story" you leave no real input just a criticism which lacks direction to make the story better. For ariesgirl sorry to say but I right from the mindset of someone young. I'm only 19 and I encounter people daily in all age groups who handle situations the way they see fit whether mature or immature (not everyone handles situations like the next person). Maybe if you let the characters develop a bit more (because honestly two chapters 1 & 1/2 pages long doesn't really show a character's true nature) you could possibly see a difference in their actions. As far as your other points you can email me and I will be happy to explain. Anyone else who finds something peculiar please don't hesitate to email me because I can explain and possibly elaborate in the next chapter! Continue to rate & comment my loves!! <3 -I.M

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