All Comments on 'Dirty Date Pt. 01'

... for this, your first story here. I think you did very well, and it#s good to have you aboard.

I don't find choking very erotic, but I know a lot of folks do, and the rest of it was just my kind of thing. I look forward to reading Part Two soon. Four stars.

While he sleeps? Kick him in the nuts and relieve him of a testicle. He'll get the idea. Nothing erotic here. Unlikeable characters.