All Comments on 'Dirty Dealings with my Step-Mom'

by FrederickMiller

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
*****

You feature them in this and your other story. But as that old fraud Freud said, sometimes a cigar is just a cigar. Very well done. You probably write seriously and if you don't, you should.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You like cigars and fucking women over your desk. You also write very good dialog. Congrats, I wish I could write half as well as you do

FrederickMillerFrederickMillerover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the heads up

I was outlining my next story and realized I had both those things again. I'm going to twist it slightly so I don't get unbearably repetitive.

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