All Comments on 'Dirty Laundry'

The sex parts were pretty good but the family is so disfunctional that it's hard to understand how they ever would get around to having sex. In the last scene, the mom was "stunned" in seeing her daughter getting ass fucked which she saw at the beginning of the story. Think things through a little bit more.

The sex scenes are good but the story is hard to follow from one part of the story to the next there isn't anything there to let you know that it isn't part of the previous paragraph. Some kind of time line would have been nice or some separation between the various scenes.