All Comments on 'Dirty Slut Contest Ch. 01'

Read this after reading another group story of yours. Raunchier, but a little more drawn out, but still suffers from too little development. However, once again, you've lifted the story by simple down-and-dirty storytelling. It's hard to resist a woman who concedes to such sexual abandon, and this story still gets my kudos.

Hot enough to make me wet but not enough to make me cum. You have some great spelling problems! Do you know what a secant really is? You ought to look it up, sailor.

Loved this one too: "I had never been so filled in my hole life." I thought at first this was a play on words, given her holes had been filled to the brim, but really, "hole" doesn't mean "whole." Keep going but spend some time editing.

Janie in Phoenix

... you have AIDS I guess...