All Comments on 'Dirty Talk'

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bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

I ennjoyed this. Hot and erotic without dropping over the line into unbelievable. Well done

QuinceQuinceover 9 years ago
Good read

Quick and smart and dirty. Nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Worthy of praise

Your descriptions were excellent, and the way the scene unfolded was very organic. Simple and (like someone else mentionned) refreshigly believeable. Looking forward to your next stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
fucking garbage

"When I start kissing you, one hand will be tangled in your hair and the other will be around your throat, holding you down. THE END

Fucking trash

Not even worth the ace I gave it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why is Alexander such a wimp? For example she winks at him but it takes him an hour to get over to her. Amelia has to lead and do everything.

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