by SexualByNature
I think you're on the right path. I sense you don't like the words cunt or cock but maybe next time. All it takes is practice.
Thanks for the feedback. I didn't use those words because I didn't want to. This kind of dirty talk to me is still very sexy, though I can understand if it isn't to you.
This story is based half off fantasy and real experience with my partner. Perhaps in the future I will change the terms around a bit.
I personally think that dirty talk can be just as sexy if not more so when used sparingly or in different ways. I was trying to capture that feeling, of what the woman feels when she hears these words that she enjoys.
:)
I appreciate your POV. Reminds me of good times. Only complaint is I wish it was longer.