All Comments on 'Dirty Train Girl'

Nice, well written and properly erotic

Loved this story. Please continue this thread! Very hot!!

A delicious twist on the customary 'male groper on the train' story. I was hooked by the premise and held in thrall by the execution of this short and sweet tale and look forward to the next installment.

Exquisitely delicious, and such a change from the usual self-consciously naughty train feeling scenes. Yours is intense, sweeping us up in uncontrolled erotic emotion. You are exceptionally good!

Loved it. You're on my favs now, missy. Thanks for a thoughtfully erotic ride!

Perhaps this is what Sheena Easton's "Morning Train" song was really about. Great story - erotic as all get out.

Yummy story! Loved the pacing and the hot build-up to more and more and more... until the climax. I wanna ride that train!

Wow. As I was reading this I could imagine myself in Louis' position and almost feel her fondling me. Just wow. Vivid imagery and not one boring paragraph. Pacing was excellent. Those 10 minutes came and went without me noticing.

Please tell me there's going to be more coming

I swear your stories make me laugh with the cleverness, so well done!

I love your stories. They make me weak with sex and laughter. They make me cry because I wish I could write that well.

Wow!!!!!!!!

Breathtaking...

That was incredible. The ending was a real topper to the story. I need to read more.

Well written. I would love to read more adventures of your Dirty Train Girl.

great story but too short ^^

"My neighbor and her girl friends watched me jerk off. They sat in front of me and watched me jerk off and cum. They liked it. I could hear them talking about me and laughing as they watched me beating off, so I jerked off in front of them three times. Each time I came real hard. They watched me cum and it felt great. They were all gorgeous brunettes. I loved it :)"

The detail of this engagement placed me just inches away from all the action. I could feel her action, her energy.

Beautifully written, an erotic pleasure in exquisitely good taste.

Now I want to meet her!

Lovely way to tie up the story and tease me with the possibility of more... Thanks!

thoroughly enjoyed that. Thanks