by satyrnidae
Despite some uneven writing in the story, it's still so lovely and lyrical and poetic. Thank you! Look at the beginning of the story--it's all cold statement and not as warm and flowing as the detailed scene. Your language really comes alive when you go into scene.
I think what I'm trying to say is this is a beautiful story as is and you are a damned fine writer and please don't do narrative summary anymore because it's too cold.
Very hot. I could barely keep my hands to myself while reading this. I hope that a part 2 is in the works..