All Comments on 'Discovery'

This is a good start, I really liked the way her friend tricked her into having sex for the first time, but the only part I did not like was when she put the straps on her, other than that it was good

And very good!

Thank you!

L

Could someone really be that sweet and innocent? I don't know but i sure would like to read more about these two girls. Please continue.

Please make more

I have mixed emotions. Normally the massage sex scene would have been hot but it was somewhat negated because it was performed on someone who had been retarded emotionally, sexually, and socially. Jasmine unknowingly had her virginity taken by Rebecca using a strap on. Rebecca took advantage of her naivety. And to me that's not right. Yes I'm glad Jasmine had a powerful orgasm but it was under the pretense of being the result of a massage. Bottom line, she was denied a choice, whether to have sex or not. The more honorable thing to do would have been to be patient with Jasmine. Develop a trusting relationship and gradually introduce her to the biology of the human body, how babies are made, and simple pleasurs such as a kiss. But nooo, that takes time and people have their own agenda. Sad. Discovery really could have been unique and really special.

:)

Incredibly erotic; skillfully told! (written).

One of the best stories on this site.