All Comments on 'Discovery River Pt. 01'

Great story had me hot to trot and I evacuated along with them mm mm

Great story, nice build-up, looking forward to the next instalment

I loved how it progressed and it built up to a great ending! Left me so horrny and wanting to be fucked!

Your story masterfully built up the erotic tension step by step until I could barely stop myself from cumming, but I kept edging my cock and fingering my ass, saving the orgasm until very near the end of the story. By that time I was so turned on I just came and came all over my hands and legs, scooping up what I could to share the protagonist's savoring of the taste of cum in his mouth as he headed to the river at the very end of the story.

All of your stories have a similar effect on me. They are delightfully intimate and realistically sexy. Thank you.

Hot sexy story dude! Really like your writing. Nice balance of plot, tension and fun at the end. Great job!