All Comments on 'Discretion Has Its Rewards'

Nicely done. My plan was to just scan the first few paragraphs and I was hooked. Great story, wonderful characters, a few too many aarghs, I mean we get it, but well written and certainly entertaining.

I loved the sense of adventure, the intrigue, and, yes, the manipulation and I am looking forward to further adventures as the foursome develops.

So very well written not just a wham bang thank you mam or sir affair. It is a big step in to the unknown when you first start a threesome it is bad enough in the UK where there are strict gun laws in the states it must be like play Russian roulette,as it does always work out so well as it did in your tale.

Tender and very sexy. Thanks.

But in wrong genre, should be under gay or group. Not my cup of tea but the writing style was ok. 3 stars

Group sex, gay, fetish; any of these would have been a better category than LW. This was really about a man's "coming out.". "First Time Gay" would have been a better title. I only gave a 3/5 because it was well-written and I think it would be a 4 or 5 in a different category.

I disagree with previous criticisms...this is not a 'gay' story...it is more of a 'pan-erotic' story since it presents more than a hint of a panoramic sexual exploration that includes hetero and homo-erotic dimensions. Rather than trying to 'pimp' the gay life, it explores the dynamic of male bisexuality in the context of a menage a trois. Lots of healthy dynamics touched on here. Hopefully a harbinger of an eventually more actualized - and less suppressed erotic culture in our society.

Very well written. I feel the category fits... either LW or Group. Great visual of exploring traditional boundaries. A little heavy with the man-on-man, but wonderfully told with overcoming inhibitions.

I appreciate the feedback, both positive and negative, from those who take time to read the story. I should point-out, that the Literotica system sometimes assigns stories to categories other than those chosen by the author. I tagged this for "group sex", but it wound up in "loving wives". Perhaps the system looks for key words to assign categories? Regardless...I think it works fairly well where it is. Thanks, Markindy

One thing literotica is here for is to make you hard or moist.Your stories do that for me!

usually i skim read alot of stories but this i read from start to finish with a hard on. Great job!!!!

Carmen is now my new fantacy girl. She makes me cum a ton keeps me hard. I luv her

Great story.

I loved every word...even the typos.

An awesome read, thanks

More please. I would especially like to read how Craig and his girlfriend (later wife) pair up and full swap with Eric and Carmen.

Erasing all the negative comments is just petulant, and predictable. Grow up.

rush to read! I simply love hearing a character's thoughts & feelings, and your story simply oozed that. Oh, and witnessing his core belief shift like that, mmmm, delicious.

While I read this story I found it a bit unappealing at first, then it kept getting more and more interesting to the point that now I crave more. Please write more to go with it, Cathy and him together possibly going down your prescribed paths with these two insatiable loving married people.

A ten!

5 Stars or more. Last letter should have been for dinner at their condo for you 4. For a guy getting his Masters ad working with high income men at the tailor shop he acts fairly crude sometimes. Language and actions

One of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. Well done!

Holy moly ! One of the hottest stories I’ve read on this site. A fantasy come true. You have some serious writing chops ! The build up and descriptions of the angst and hesitation on Craig’s part was palpable. Societies “rules” make sex way too serious. It makes us think that touching a guy intimately makes us gay. Nothing could be further from the truth. Enjoyment of someone’s body need not be restricted to the opposite sex. Your descriptions of the sex scenes was incredible and each of their reservations about touching and being touched felt real. A great job. Thanks for sharing what’s in your very fertile mind. 5-🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆❤️