All Comments on 'Disney Delight'

What is the need for so many writers to describe a woman by her bra size? Or a man by the size of his cock? Does every married man in the world have a wife with double D's except me? Damn it, tell me it ain't so!

Sorry, but she really does have double d's.....it's so!

Sorry, HDK... Mrs Haversackers wears a 34DD bra, too. However, I agree with your comment. Too many writers expend too many words describing their characters "assets" when it's really not relevant to the story. It's simply become part of the Literotica Loving Wives "format".

Lots of description, which is nice; but no tension or emotion, which is not so good in a short story.

Trust me. Once you have them , you'll see all you want of the joint and then some.

Sorry, but some of these lines could have been delivered by a speak-your-weight machine. You need to introduce a higher level of informality and intimacy: after all, Joe and Janet have been married for six years, the girls have a sexual past and two of the three already know the vacation will include a threesome.

My wife has DDs and they are natural. But she also has a big ass and a belly.

I agree with HDK. "gloriously big tits, as firm as when she bought them" or "wonderful, soft breasts, big enough to smother me" would be better descriptions than "36DD".

Enough said.

"Mr Anon" doesn't like this but I DO!!! You get a big 5 for this hot fucking story!!! I very seldom give a 5 but this story is soooo Hot, I couldn't whack off fast enough!! I hope Gloria stays with you guys awhile, & rewards you for being such a nice guy!!lol

They must have spent all their time in Fantasyland.

I love your theme of a shared husband! Pure fantasy but none of back stabbing or disrespect of one spouse over the other as is too often seen in the LW section.

This is a very nice partial story, though much too short. That was a great touch to have Joe invite Gloria along to keep her from being alone with a newly broken heart. It showed him to be a nice guy. His delightful reward might not have been completely realistic, but was quite entertaining. Another nice touch was Janet and Gloria holding Joe's hands to cope with the women's fear of flying. However, some dramatic tension and a slower buildup would've made for a better tale. Still, thanks for sharing your work with us!

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