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I had to resubmit this story and when I did I posted the file without the trigger warnings. My sincerest apologies for any upset I may have caused.

Peace and joy,

Shell

Not sure what will happen to Josh, considering the circumstances not sure he'll live and wonder how Vince will feel when he learns of the other's fate.

'I did the only thing I could do. I showed him I loved him.' Yet the inability to accept love is pervasive in depression. Despair drips from every sentence in the first chapter. Perhaps emotions are better placed in the memory sack than the present reality. Is Josh's flame of life to be blown out?

This story really touched me and I'd love to read more, I hope there is some kind of peace and resolution for one or both of the main characters. The heartbreak and desperation is palpable, and it has definitely gripped me, please write more! :)

Please continue this story, it's really good