by Bokhun
Thank you for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to reading many more.
I.just found this and I must say it very interesting and somewhat of. Fresh idea. I like and look forward to more. Thank you for Sharing.
Its a goodstory, but i keep getting confused on whats going on. You might need someone to do a "once over"
It's like Tom Clancy had sexy with J. R. R. Tolkien !!
Thanks for posting.