All Comments on 'Distant Shores'

I would like this to continue it would be interesting to see how he fits into a less developed culture. One thing I missed at firrt glance, was she promised to someone else or was she raped and a semi outcast or both? Still well done. -- UK CYNIC.

Continue this. I like the idea of a series.

Do continue, a series would be appreciated.

That was well deserving of an E. Your story was so detailed and fluid. I loved both your characters and the ambivalent feelings they initially encountered. The sex just made for a lovely bonus to an already superb story. I hope to be reading more from you soon!

amazing, can't wait to read more!

That was refreshing! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Thank you for a great read!

Well done hope to see more from you.

Your writing is enjoyable, please continue with this story.

Keep up the good work! Enjoyed the buildup it made the end even sweeter. Your imagination had my imagination going! Totally hot!

I really wanted to get up and dance!! Your story is so detail-oriented, i would love to see what happens next with these two. Great job!

Do they have kids? What do they look like? Does he stay with the tribe? Does a legend grow about the half-elf offspring?

Chapter 2 please.

Wow what incredible awesome story...great job!!

it is a shame you stopped the story,it would be nice that elf make the girl pregnant .he should stop thinking about his superior race statas.that will make the story real intersting.it is the best story i read in si fi.

I really don't into Sci-fi stories but this one was really good. So, why you stop there?

More Please!!!!

Please add more it needs more chapters preferably some dialog as well. I really think you should finish this and don't keep us waiting any longer!!!!!!!!!!!

That was an awesome read. More stories please

sooo good what to know what happens does she realize her didn't cum in her because he thinks shes inferior to him

Please come back and finish this story.

Come back and finish this novel.

I hope you will one day finish this story. Your writing is engaging.

Great start, please keep going, very entertaining.