All Comments on 'Distribution Ch. 08'

Liked the dialogue between the lovers, as it reinforced how comfortable they have become with each other. The last lines were very well done.

This story is growing on me, it is well crafted drawing the reader into the plot and making the reader empathise with the main characters.

For me Bryan and Paige seem to have a great future and futher stories could be developed.

many thanks for this great story

Interesting how Paige withdrew so much in the first few chapters. I know that I would have gotten angry with her tendency to hang up the telephone. In a way she would be too controling for my tastes. But it is a beautiful story and to each his own!