by o2byoung
Just to say how much I am enjoying this story. It’s well written and nothing seems to go wrong with the characters. And whilst most authors seem to think a little misunderstanding between the heroes is essential I think that a happy story is equally valid.
And where I think that this story gains on prison school, which incidentally I also enjoyed, is that there are only two main characters, albeit with lots of subsidiaries, and thus it is easier to follow without confusion.
I hope to read many more of your submissions
Thanks for posting
To my readers:
Starting with Part 10, I’m trying to make the chapters a bit shorter, so I can upload more often. I had hoped to get past DJ 20th Birthday and Thanksgiving with this one, but they will happen early in Part 11. (I think, I never know what these characters are going to do to upset my script!)
If part 10 is accepted, it should be available for viewing within 72 hours. 12/5/17