All Comments on 'Djinn and Tonic'

A really clever story, thanks for sharing it.

It made a good change from the usual style.

This story reads very similar to another story about Djinns I have read. A little to similar. Is this a rewrite of something you wrote before under another name, because it sounds like it.

I posted this story to the Erotic Mind Control Story Archive (www.mcstories.com) a while back. I'm also aware of someone who used this story without permission as the basis for a choose your own adventure story over at chyoa.com.

I've only changed like four sentences since I first posted it.

Hi Anostus, I'm Sammy123 the guy that copy your prologue for the basis for a CHYOA story. I'm a big fan! Do you want me to take down the 2 copied threads out of the story? If so, I will rewrite them but I hope you're okay with it. And if you are ok with it, it would be so cool to have you contributed!

You've got my blessing to keep using my prologue in your CHYOA story. I'll definitely consider contributing to your story.

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This really isn't that bad of a story but it's kind of all over the place at least during the beginning that I read, first Jennifer is smart and wants to talk about educational subjects, then all of a sudden even without the magic she's dumb? Am I missing something?

What a mess.

This dude used a broken ass power in the stupidest ways possible. It does not seem like he was purposely written stupid.