by TheEarl
i dunno about her, but it had me squirming. awesome stroke, handsome! more, please. you do this just as well as your other stories. i think you might just be my new idol.
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Oy! I like! You got me all tingly and bothered this morning, Earl! Again, ahem, please feel free to use me if Svenska is too "overcome." ;)
Earl, when you said this was smut, I was expecting something so much less eloquent and gorgeous. Your imagery and attention to detail is just stunning. Oh, and it was so very hot, did I mention that? -S.
Left me breathless and wanting more. Let me know as you as you part 2 finished. You continually amaze me!
Are you sure you're straight? Neat little twist at the end, too! This was very erotic!
Thanks for dedicating a story to me, next time can I have sex with a woman? :) (psst, good job)
Thank you, Earl. I'm touched. (PS: This version was even better than the draft you wrote for me!) *french kiss*
It was okay, but can you make ur next story be of a you-I noun. It makes the reader feel more involved.
Thanks
Straight sex scenes usually bore me, but I liked the extra "touches" that make this more than just a description -- the "strange sensations", the wrestling -- and the enjoyment. Thank you for writing this one down! Of course, it's only a vignette and I'm not COMPLETELY satisfied with it, but it's an excellent appetizer!
I really liked the twist at the end and the sensations you included were really good. Now I'm all hot and bothered!
Good short sexy story, nice feeling. Just a note - you used the word watch ( or variations of it ) three times in the first paragraph - before you got into the rhythm.
Yes, it does indeed do something for me. I want to be the blonde in that room! Meow!