All Comments on 'Do It For Him'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
I was about to give this story four stars.

Then I looked at your profile and discovered you were a new writer to us here! So I decided to make that five stars, add a welcome, say 'Thank you' and ask you to bring us more like this - a really fine story.

MaynessMaynessover 11 years ago

Good short story, very good for your first! Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
really good start

More please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Her answer?

No! This is your fantasy and that's what it's going to remain - a fantasy! Take your hands off me and remember I don't want to play these sick games of yours. And if he persists? Call the Police, show them the bruises and PRESS CHARGES! What kind of sick, perverted freak feels the need to beat a woman? What a dick. I hope he spends years in jail. Nothing remotely sexy about torturing someone.

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