All Comments on 'Do You Think It Will Hurt?'

well done

This is a sweet story. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

Chapter 2 please!

and probably very close to the discussion that would go on between two in this position. well done.

Scar, Been there,done that, almost to the letter. Been there over 40 yrs. with my best friend.Chapter two quickly. Great read.

your use of dialogue. Thank you.

Loved to read this; so moving and natural. Just got lost a little in the dialog, but who cares? Meg and Bub are a great pair.

Thanks for sharing

Great use of dialog, great development of the story, looking forward to the next chapter.

That's really good!!!!

Awesome! Please keep going!

I laughed, I cried, I laughed a lot more....

The dialog was outstanding. Reminded me of myself and my best friend...er.. actually cousin... and she is 2 weeks older than me and always used to hold it over my head too. :)

Our first kiss was when we were teenagers in grandma's basement :0

Loved that, i would like for you to continue but it is perfect as a short story! Very cute.

I love it ! finish it !

its always the first time again with different couples, TK U MLJ LV NV

Started just right - then it become more of the same. No real story, other than both suddenly decided it would be okay to kiss. I guess that is going to occur. Story seemed to simply drop off with nothing happening. Didn't enjoy it; even with sex there wouldn't have been a story created.

I hope you will continue....Kiss her you idiot.

Sweet. Fun. Real. Five stars.