All Comments on 'Doctor Visit Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow!

I absolutely loved this story.....wonderful job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wow

Pls more, you are a awsome writer. I loved this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Fantastic!!

I loved this story. I hope you continue to submit. I'll keep looking for stories written by you. Thank you so much for sharing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Almost perfect, BUT

Please find a proofreader who can fix the errors that detract and distract from an otherwise fine story. I enjoyed all three chapters. This one was especially hot. Don't rely on spell check and keep exercising that beautiful imagination of yours.

jeanyjeanyabout 15 years ago
Amazing!

I would love to read the continuation of this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Glad I kept reading....

While I prefer to read one on one stories and I enjoy emotional depth, I'm glad I read this one and this chapter in particular.

The scenes between Sue and Anthony are very intense, very versatile and I loved the writing.

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