by windwriter
I loved this story. I hope you continue to submit. I'll keep looking for stories written by you. Thank you so much for sharing!!
Please find a proofreader who can fix the errors that detract and distract from an otherwise fine story. I enjoyed all three chapters. This one was especially hot. Don't rely on spell check and keep exercising that beautiful imagination of yours.
While I prefer to read one on one stories and I enjoy emotional depth, I'm glad I read this one and this chapter in particular.
The scenes between Sue and Anthony are very intense, very versatile and I loved the writing.