All Comments on 'Doctor Who: Panic Moon Ch. 09'

by Kurokami

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good work

Nice!

Looks like Sander might being biting off a little more than he can chew with Christina. I wonder what will happen when she meets Amy. Obviously, they have a common enemy and goal.

I also wonder who this Marduk guy is? What does he want with Sander? And will we be seeing what the Doctor and Rory are up to?

BTW, can we assume that all of this takes place before Amy gets kidnapped by Kovarian and replaced with a Ganger?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Unnecessary

Enough already with the double spacing of the paragraphs, it's makes the reading difficult with all the scrolling needed, forget it, do the usual thing

RoadRunner101

KurokamiKurokamiover 12 years agoAuthor
The paragraph spacing...

That wasn't something I did intentionally, dude. When I wrote the chapter I used the same single spacing paragraph structure I have every other time. Why would I change that?

No, the spacing issue seems to be a Lit issue, made after submission. Same reason my note to the site editor is still at the top of the story, too. I don't really know what's going on, but it's unfortunate. Hopefully it won't happen again.

Kurokami

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Anagram

cliffhanger !!!! Is marduk an anagram by any chance...

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