All Comments on 'Doctors Office Ch. 01'

After you finish high school you will understand just how stupid this story really is.

I thought the story seemed to be like a fantasy and I enjoyed the read, although it did make the newlywed wife out to be a little slut, but perhaps that is what the author wanted.

Too bad she was already pregnant, but the doctor may have been lying about that, and he is the one who knocked her up.

Thanks for the read

Hot story!

keep writing, the comment about high school is obviously from some unimaginative person unable to suspend disbelief for the sake of a quick hot read.

Really is incredibly stupid.

You took a good plot and threw it in the trash. Rotten ending. Try again.

Pretty hot story. Keep writing.

"......all which lead to her erection. " Are you kidding?

Good story!

Please write another part it's amazing.

Dont listen to the negative comments they are just hating.

I mean at least there was no spelling errors. (-:

Hope there are further chapters!

I know it is just a story. But you must have jerked and blew your load as you wrote this. Try again.

Dream story. thanks for writing it..

Nice story! I only wish that the nurse had been there to assist! Since it's marked, "Ch. 1", I assume there's more already, or, at the very least, on the way. Looking forward to it!

He needs to suffer in every way.

Loved reading about how the doctor forced this little slut, especially how he used her panties to keep her quiet

Unfinished --No Stars.

Agree with Anon 04/06/13. Try writing after you get into and then geaduate from high school.

What's an "examine"? It must be a new medical term since you used it twice, meaning it was not a mere typo, you must have thought "examine" is a word. My copy of Dorland's Medical Dictionary doesn't list it however.

Also agree with devilspy2001, this doc is going to jail if wife comes out of her daze after this rape, or if hubby finds out.

Written by a 13 year old nerd, who apparently has never met any woman except mommy. It’s really so bad that mommy took away his laptop.