All Comments on 'Doctor's Orders'

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sexymeupsexymeupover 6 years ago
sci-fi ?

This really is not mind control. It is more of sci-fi & fantasy and should be posted there, for that reason I gave it 2 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not sci-fi.

More like sci-fantasy.

If a persons breasts went from D to I's in seconds they would be in agony. Not that it's actually productive to be logical.

Still better than people who produce nothing.

Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lol

Couldn't help but crack up at the Roy Moore reference.

john_sixfooterjohn_sixfooterabout 6 years ago
Well done

Nice touch, it gives "there's an app for that" (from the iPhone 3g Commercial) a whole new meaning.

The story is good but you offered details of her physical changes too late in the story for it to make a difference when they were most needed.

This story does bring a whole new meaning to extortion, nice touch.

Yes, please do write another story as a follow-up.

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