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All Comments on 'Doctor's Orders'

by electricman5000

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markellymarkellyover 6 years ago
Loved it...

Now this I liked, a real good read and a beautiful ending, Thank you for posting this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story, distracting errors

You story was good, in general, but I found the errors to be very distracting. Learn the rules for quotes in dialog. Would vastly improve your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Beautiful!

What a beautiful story! Both of then got what they wanted!

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