by LesLumens
Okay, perhaps it was (as you said) a bit odd, but I liked the story and the perspective. Sometimes, "uncommon" is a good thing.
-- KK in Texas
I felt lonely. That is the feeling this story gave me. And with that loneliness I felt sadness. Will the cougar ever find a mate? I hope so. Great story with an interesting way of telling it.
Thanks for the great story! I liked the flow...I liked the style...
I guess you captured me again. I felt like the cougar. No sooner done with the prey and feeling like I needed more. How did you capture it.
The story had an uneasy tone of dread throughout. You made the excerpts work well. The ending was left ambiguous to good effect.
Rich and full despite the relatively brief story. Thanks.