All Comments on 'Documentary: Cougar'

by LesLumens

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice work!

Okay, perhaps it was (as you said) a bit odd, but I liked the story and the perspective. Sometimes, "uncommon" is a good thing.

-- KK in Texas

Tearsofsorrow2Tearsofsorrow2over 15 years ago
This is good

I felt lonely. That is the feeling this story gave me. And with that loneliness I felt sadness. Will the cougar ever find a mate? I hope so. Great story with an interesting way of telling it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great work!

Thanks for the great story! I liked the flow...I liked the style...

unicorn64unicorn64over 10 years ago

I guess you captured me again. I felt like the cougar. No sooner done with the prey and feeling like I needed more. How did you capture it.

LaRascasseLaRascassealmost 10 years ago
Sinister... ominous

The story had an uneasy tone of dread throughout. You made the excerpts work well. The ending was left ambiguous to good effect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well done, and compelling.

Rich and full despite the relatively brief story. Thanks.

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