All Comments on 'Does She or Doesn't She? Ch. 01'

by shadywriter

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klaxxklaxxover 16 years ago
Well done!

Very well written, erotic, loving . . . everything I come to Literotica to find. If you plan on continuing this story, I hope it doesn't go south. If it ultimately ends happily, that's ok, though. I'm off to read more of your stuff, if you have any posted. Thanks for a great read.

Orion623Orion623over 16 years ago
Terrific

Sexy and loving. Just what this section of Literotica needs. Looking forward to reading Ch. 2.

jbhoft7jbhoft7over 16 years ago
Well

Will he or won't he ask her if she is the model. I would say he should just love her for being her.

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