All Comments on 'Doing Dad's Girlfriend Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great start

This first chapter has a teasing build up, plot and hot sex scenes. Please keep this series going as it has plenty potential. Good job.

mBrowmBrowover 9 years ago
Auspicious launch

For enduring such a protracted tease, we must petition the author to relieve our tension and properly extend the narrative. Thanks, fuzzyb2. It's a good story buoyed by good writing technique.

dirtyomandirtyomanover 9 years ago
What a lovely Start!

Other than the fact you called Adrianna "Alexa" in the last paragraph. I see no flaws in this perfect Teasing, handjob!! You have provided enough hints at the fact she likes his dick for us to want MORE!! I'm out for #3 now as I have already read #2!!

Thanks for writing a really good storyline.

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I find it thrilling to build these stories and invent viable relationships from which others can draw pleasure. Please comment or email me ideas and feedback. It's all welcome.

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