by fuzzyb2
This first chapter has a teasing build up, plot and hot sex scenes. Please keep this series going as it has plenty potential. Good job.
For enduring such a protracted tease, we must petition the author to relieve our tension and properly extend the narrative. Thanks, fuzzyb2. It's a good story buoyed by good writing technique.
Other than the fact you called Adrianna "Alexa" in the last paragraph. I see no flaws in this perfect Teasing, handjob!! You have provided enough hints at the fact she likes his dick for us to want MORE!! I'm out for #3 now as I have already read #2!!
Thanks for writing a really good storyline.